Angel Sanctuary OC

Hey Guys,

I´ve tried to draw my first AS-OC and it sucks very much.
I just like her Hairs, but der Face be very ugly.
Her Name is Ayumu Akijama and she is an sinful Child.
Made between an Angel and an People.
One Day she meets Katan (Catan) and the dark Streets of Tokyo.
He give her an Angel Sanctuary Game...
The Picture was made with Paint Tool Sai only.
Please tell me what you think!